Sunday, November 6, 2011

Just another story

Once a guy who never did belong
Hurting people for a purpose he knew he was wrong
Then was this girl who fell in love
three lil' words to say and hear
never did he care, never she did dare.

Determined one day she blurted it out
caught off guard he said he did too.
his love was fake while her's was true
All this while he pretended when her love grew.

Lil' did she know her heart would shatter
All for a person for whom it never did matter
Left alone with absolutely nothing
she lost it all, even the dream she lived in.

8 comments:

  1. well rhymed ! and a story told with care ...

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  2. Was lost while reading. Love the way it unwraps the sensations bit by bit.

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  3. lovely poem about troublesome love, most of us don't dare to clean the shattered remains of our existence

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  4. Good one...very well written :)

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  5. Very well written..! I know you could write, but never thought they could be poems too..:)

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  6. Sigh! Another one without a happy ending..

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  7. very well woven :) emotions too strong.

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