Wednesday, April 6, 2011

Pain

Here I am knocking at your door,
again and again,
Don't fear ..don't you dare turn a deaf ear,
Just love me nurture me,
Don't kill me- says the pain
I'll cause misery everywhere.
Believe me hold on to me tight ,
I'll carry you to soaring heights.




5 comments:

  1. You spoke my mind, fellow side kick. :)

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  2. I kinda agree with the line - don't kill me, love me nuture me! Probably cus you never really get over the pain..but instead move along with it. But also disagree with 'hold me tight' cus it's only going to make it worse.
    But yes, sometimes...nothing works. Not even letting go or holding on. the line 'i'll cause misery everywhere' is just so apt!!

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  3. Its good to know ppl agree. cuz sometimes getting rid of the pain takes so much energy that u feel exhausted . i've learnt to just let it be .

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  4. Exactly! Getting rid of the pain is a pain in itself. letting it be and moving ALONG with it..works best :)

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  5. Very nicely written...keep it up. :)

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